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Your smie...
It's so reasuring. It makes me feel like nothing will go wrong. That smile of yours leads me on. I cant think of anything else while you're gone.
Your touch...
It's so gentle. It makes me feel like I never want to  have you out of my grasp, or escape from your strong grip. That grip you have makes me feel. I want it to stay that way.
Your voice...
It's so comforting. It makes my heart jump when i hear you calling my name. That voice harness leads me whenever I lose my way in the dark. I will forever hold you in my heart.
Your eyes...
They're so mysterious. When I glance into them, I become lost in their dark brown glaze. Those eyes...when we lock them in a stare,  I lose my heart...
©2007-2009 ~greenfreak07
:icongreenfreak07:

Author's Comments

Hey guys!!! This is a poem i wrote a while back. Im new to this stuff so i have no idea what im doing. When you read this, please tell me if you like it or not. I want your opinions good or bad. Thanks a bunch!!!

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:iconlittleone1312:
Great job leslie!!!
you know what i'm going to get you some friends on here okay???

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Your golden green eyes are aluring like poison,
it makes me want to cut open your pale skin and expose your bright red beating heart.
I would presurve it along with your eyes in glass jars to gaze apon for the rest of eternity.

Kaori Yuki:
Godchild
:iconlharvey1515:
^_^ sounds good leslie *get killed by sarah*

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You sir are wrong!
I am NOT retarded, I'm just overjoyed!
:D theorpy
>.O Your life is what you make it! So make it Rock!
:icongreenfreak07:
thanx that means alot coming from u!!!!!!!!
Y did sarah kill u?
*revives u*
i still want u around!!!!!

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:sing: Sumtime I try not 2 hate myself for everything I never said...when you were here...:sing:
:icongreenfreak07:
yaay!

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:sing: Sumtime I try not 2 hate myself for everything I never said...when you were here...:sing:
:iconlittleone1312:
lolz

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Your golden green eyes are aluring like poison,
it makes me want to cut open your pale skin and expose your bright red beating heart.
I would presurve it along with your eyes in glass jars to gaze apon for the rest of eternity.

Kaori Yuki:
Godchild
:icongreenfreak07:
yup
yup
yup

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:sing: Sumtime I try not 2 hate myself for everything I never said...when you were here...:sing:
:icongreenfreak07:
Whats so funny???
I wanna kno!!!!

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:sing: Sumtime I try not 2 hate myself for everything I never said...when you were here...:sing:
:iconlittleone1312:
lol nothing leslie

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Your golden green eyes are aluring like poison,
it makes me want to cut open your pale skin and expose your bright red beating heart.
I would presurve it along with your eyes in glass jars to gaze apon for the rest of eternity.

Kaori Yuki:
Godchild
:icongreenfreak07:
i dont remember what i said........
Good bye for now
lol

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:sing: Sumtime I try not 2 hate myself for everything I never said...when you were here...:sing:
:iconlharvey1515:
^_^ aww, :hug: :glomp:
>.O i dont remember
^_^ i'm glad to hear that

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You sir are wrong!
I am NOT retarded, I'm just overjoyed!
:D theorpy
>.O Your life is what you make it! So make it Rock!

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